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These are my original writing notes
for Fast Friends.
I quite literally sat down, wrote this out, and then
tightened it
up. One of the problems with writing on a computer is that
I'm
really editing as I go - it's all brainstorming and I change
things on the fly. In other words, I can't show you (I don't
really remember!) all the steps along the way. Notwithstanding that,
it's pretty close to what spilled out of me.
Fast Friends – the adventures of Marie and
Kelly when
they were young
- The goal is to tell a 6-8 page story featuring the
two leads
from the road to god knows… as 8 year old girls. I
wouldn’t mind doing
a series of these at some point, but for now I want to focus on a story
where they first meet.
- The image I really like is Marie sitting on some
concrete
steps all by herself. Could be a school. She’s lonely and
upset. I’m
loosely thinking of having this be the aftermath of a bullying
experience and if so she could have some favourite comic torn up and
left in piles around her.
- I don’t want the story to maudlin, though.
It’s
important
that it’s fun and light. I definitely want the end to have
the feeling
of Casablanca (“this could be the start of a beautiful
friendship”).
- The idea here is how friendship can help two people
get
over their own problems. I don’t want Kelly’s
friendship to seem like a
crutch for Marie so there needs to be some balance. Something she can
help Kelly with, too.
- Actually, instead of bullying I think I’ll
go in a
different direction. Betty, Marie’s mom, wants her daughter
to get some
exercise. So she kicks her out on the front steps to get some fresh
air. Marie, for her part, would dearly like nothing better than to curl
and read. Betty ain’t gonna allow that and tosses her
daughter outside
with a ball. Marie is sitting there, aimlessly bouncing the ball off a
step, as Kelly comes walking up the sidewalk.
- I’m loosely thinking that she has to return
three
late
movies and was hoping not to have to pay the fine. She knows she has
to; she just doesn’t want to. Her Mom had picked
‘em out for her a few
days ago and they aren’t movies she’d ever watch
(touchy feely cutesy
cartoons or some such). As a result, she forgot about ‘em.
Now, she’d
much rather Return of the Jedi but she’s going to have to pay
the fine
on the late flicks.
- Marie knows the corner store people really well and
is
pretty confident she can get the store owner
(“Todd“) to wipe the fine
clear. That way Kelly can rent whatever she wants to.
- The story will end with the two of them walking down
the
street, chatting about how silly Return’s Ewoks were but how
cool the
space battle was. Kelly, “I even heard they were supposed to
be wookies
instead of teddy bears. Can you imagine? Wookies! How cool would that
have been?!” (text gradually gets smaller).
If you'd like to see how this is turned into the actual plot breakdown,
please
click here. And if you'd like to see how this
compares to the finished art, the entire
story can be read here. |

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